P.S. I Want to Restate
My Offer To You
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Every sales
letter needs
a P.S. -
don't even
think about
completing
your letter
until you've
created one.
The P.S. can make or break your letter. According to DM legend Ted Nicholas, the 7 most used P.S. types in successful sales letters are those which: 1. Motivate the prospect to take action now ==> Ex. "P.S. We will not repeat this offer in 2004. please act now. This offer expires on 12/31/03." 2. Reinforce the offer ==> Ex. "P.S. Apply today, and enjoy all the benefits of membership. Those listed here are just a handful of what's available..." 3. Emphasize or introduce a premium or bonus ==> Ex. "P.S. We've ordered enough FREE CREELS - we think - to meet the anticipated response. But they are likely to go fast, so why risk waiting months while we re-order? Since your creel will be shipped as soon as you pay for your subscription, why not get it immediately by enclosing payment now?" 4. Introduce a surprise benefit ==> Ex. "P.S. Please note that your Gift Card has your name on it - and may not be used by anyone else." 5. Emphasize price or terms of your offer ==> Ex. "P.S. Put our statements to the proof by subscribing for the next 12 weeks for just $12. This is the shortest subscription term we offer - and is a perfect way to get acquainted with The Gazette." 6. Emphasize tax deductibility of purchase ==> Ex. "P.S. It's important to note that The Gazette's subscription price may be tax deductible." 7. Emphasize guarantee ==> Ex. "P.S. Should The Gazette not measure up to your expectations, you may cancel this trial arrangement at any point and receive a refund for the undelivered portion of your subscription." © 2004 By Craig Valine
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